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Post by voiceofgod on Mar 7, 2005 18:33:12 GMT -5
the unheard flap of wings
hearts will roam like birds south for winter never is the path explained it is unknown but comforatable we are happy most when we are lost we fly for yet a moment and still soar forever if in love this journey to a warm place takes us on the wings of passion the unheard flap of wings surrounds us until time itself embraces our flight as if only you and i were minutes on our second way around
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Post by voiceofgod on Mar 7, 2005 18:59:39 GMT -5
The Winter
these thoughts are cracked like lips upon the frost while walking through the fire iscicles formed on the tips of my laughter but whoever follies on the frozen tundra- -never fails to melt the banks for walking with you is warmth enough- -to heat the hand that holds the glove this is friction ten times the world over within your breath i find the flame to face the winter until we meet the spring again and watch the flowers frost in morning
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Post by voiceofgod on Mar 7, 2005 19:02:53 GMT -5
R.E.M. Inside Of Him
drooling from the corners of a nightmare plaguing slumber- -i awake to find another empty dream somewhere in the darkness of a fearful child of torture- -watch in horror as the nightmare blends with memory
(that's REM as in rem sleep not the band)
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Post by xxxxSTINKFISTxxxx on Mar 8, 2005 14:39:54 GMT -5
Very nice work V.O.G i like your wrighting style
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Post by voiceofgod on Mar 9, 2005 20:13:22 GMT -5
Very nice work V.O.G i like your wrighting style Thank you, Your comments are very much appreciated.
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Post by xxxxSTINKFISTxxxx on Mar 13, 2005 21:39:32 GMT -5
Heres something i recently wrote, i havent came up with a name yet but i hope you like it.
There is a dark place deep inside me Underneath this skin and bone Showing me things i couldnt see Unlocking every fear unknown Scratching through my head desperatly Taking controll in my mind Tearing through every scrap of sanity Leaving no trace of any kind
Why wont anybody help me? Regain my mind and take controll Why wont anybody help me? Bring me back and kill this mole
Listen now and listen well I can open up your eyes I can save you in this hell Help you up and feed you lies
I'm the only one who can help you Take my hand and trust in me I'm the only one who can help you I will help you find the key
I'll look away as i fall into darkness You will only know me as a fading memory I say goodbye with one fateful kiss You will never find me
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Post by Halo on Mar 13, 2005 23:49:27 GMT -5
xxstinkfistxx and voiceofgod: I am so glad you two post your "creativity" here. I really enjoy reading it. You both express yourself so well.
I am honored that you both share your art here at "For the Love of MJK"
Thanks.
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Post by xxxxSTINKFISTxxxx on Mar 13, 2005 23:55:09 GMT -5
Thank you very much Halo, im honored to be able to post here.
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Post by voiceofgod on Mar 14, 2005 8:01:23 GMT -5
Thanks H. By the way Stinkfist that poem is bad ass. I like it. Your writing style is awesome too.
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Post by TheAnomicSoul on Mar 15, 2005 2:38:00 GMT -5
I just finished this poem. I really like this one too. It's dedicated to someone who will be anonymous.
You & Only You
I walk this endless path in darkness A path that defines pain,sorrow,deception, & tears Then you come into my life without a sign Taking all the pain & lies away Bringing that very rare smile back to my face Evrey move you make & evrey word you say makes me smile When you know I'm not feeling right Feeling your love will make it alright Only you can make that happen for me You make me feel so loved & special in a way I can't describe You light up my darkest days with your beautiful smile Whenever I'm cold I can always count on your warm embrace Whenever a tear falls from your eye, I feel like I'm drowning in it Whenever you cry my heart breaks It takes the wind right out of me and chokes me Your voice is as beautiful as a angels face It sends shivers down my spine Only you can do this And I love you for it
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Post by voiceofgod on Mar 15, 2005 7:06:45 GMT -5
Well whoever that is A-Soul I hope they continue to make you that happy. They must be worth a million to make you feel like that. ;D Good poem.
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Post by TheAnomicSoul on Mar 15, 2005 13:01:52 GMT -5
Thank you & yes you are right about that person
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Post by voiceofgod on Mar 15, 2005 14:21:11 GMT -5
Just so I don't get sued for copyright infringement, "Signs of Slippage" is taken from Black House by Steven King & Peter Straub. Which is you haven't read is fookin bad ass.
Signs Of Slippage
residue around the cancer of a heart daggers thrown into the crowd of meger passerbys hypnosis helps to fight- -the plague that builds deep in lower brains
and i don't know the antidote i can't find a cure for you
these are signs of slippage
something blocks the nerves from twitching everybody lands a punch violence yet begets more violence depression intrigues the ego just enough to make the ends meet within a flame
and i don't know the antidote i can't find a cure with you
these are signs of slippage
dreams of granger shit out on the boulevard rotten stumps of hollow hangings- -leave mildew on the windowsill the moans of several hundred million- -echo through an empty canyon
these are all the signs
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Post by Halo on Mar 15, 2005 16:19:54 GMT -5
Thank you & yes you are right about that person Aw Soul, how wonderful for you that you have someone in your life that makes you feel that way. I'm so happy for you.
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Post by xxxxSTINKFISTxxxx on Mar 17, 2005 1:12:19 GMT -5
Very nice work soul, that person must be very happy to have ya
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