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Post by erishkigal on Jun 20, 2005 23:13:44 GMT -5
Thanks both! Compliments raise my self esteem
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Post by Halo on Jun 20, 2005 23:45:15 GMT -5
Kevin: Once again, you amaze me. Your writing expresses so much emotion.
Erish!!! Good to see you and thanks for sharing those poems. I enjoyed them greatly. I hope to read more in the furture.
Cheers to both of you and your talents!!
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Post by erishkigal on Jun 21, 2005 2:56:00 GMT -5
Thanks Suse. Those two poems are rare pieces or artwork that I make that I dont hate the second they are complete... And my name is Joel
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Post by Halo on Jun 21, 2005 7:37:05 GMT -5
Thanks Suse. Those two poems are rare pieces or artwork that I make that I dont hate the second they are complete... And my name is Joel Joel, Maybe you should post some of the artwork that you hate and let us decide. I bet they are just as good as the poems you just posted. You're always your own worst critic. Maybe others can see something in them you are not seeing.
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Post by britany on Jun 21, 2005 21:14:12 GMT -5
I still have write's block this is all i could get...
This light has not been my own,it has been others,others that try to make their light fade,everyone can see theirs but not mine.This is over, i will not be taken by the mistakes that have been put in front of me.i will not take this for you,i have been in here to many times, your sorrow has shadowed on me. What i have heard you say, has fallen away and i'm going back again.
Recollecting my lost thoughts has been hard, it has all been unreal.I've lost it all, what i see is not true.Every one has been blinded. I carry what you had now, all the feelings are right there, we are not the same,we have not seen the same,we did not hear the same. All the light i have is reflected off of yours. what i have heard you say has drifted away and i am left alone again.
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Post by erishkigal on Jun 22, 2005 2:07:07 GMT -5
*sits next to you*
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Post by TheAnomicSoul on Jun 22, 2005 22:26:09 GMT -5
Aleviation
Waking up to see another day Everyday feels the same Take the pain away Day by day I decay Soon I'll fade away Soon I'll break away
And I don't want to play No need to pray Just slay away my sick cliche And I'll fade away I will go away
Every single day I lock myself away Try to ignore the betray My sweetist friend... I'm leaving this place
Trying to erase all these memories of myself All these memories are a discrace Just gimmie a gun and let my finger embrace the trigger No more games I've been played long enough Things are more tough Life is more rough Darker skies await me Living this life to a tolerable degree But I cannot tolerate no longer
Thought living this way would make me stronger But I'm growing more anger and hate I cannot take this I must break this Beat this Kill this I cannot let this become me I'll break myself I'll fade away 4u... 4 U
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Post by erishkigal on Jun 23, 2005 4:44:59 GMT -5
do you have a band?
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Post by TheAnomicSoul on Jun 23, 2005 10:24:15 GMT -5
No
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Post by SparrowsSoliloquy on Jun 25, 2005 23:32:55 GMT -5
I am so dead tired right now.. I have been working on my dance recital stuff.. the dress rehearsal is tomorrow and I need to get some sleep.. I just spent about 7 hours making 2 billboards promoting the recital theme and our studio..anyway.. back to the topic.. I was just checking in and ..umm.. Kevin.. Im wondering if there is a place that takes submissions for sonwriters and lyric writers.. there has got to be a place where you can send your stuff and it goes out to different people in the music biz and somehow they can get passed on to others that might feel emotionally connected to what you are saying and do your song...have you ever thought about that? I know you would much rather prefer singing your song.. yourself.. but it was just a passing thought I had and I thought I would share it with you.. Susan.. I got your email.. I will reply to asap! Sweet Dreams.. - Jennifer
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Post by TheAnomicSoul on Jun 26, 2005 19:26:31 GMT -5
I don't know if they have a site like that. But yet I never looked. It would be good to sing the songs I write to release some of the anger I put into it. The weird thing but I kinda like is that people who read my writings say it's something that Jonathan Davis (Korn) would write. And I love that man. So yea I would like to sing it and shit but I don't know where to begin. Can't start a band cause people don't play anything and if they do they are already in a band.
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Post by erishkigal on Jun 26, 2005 22:36:51 GMT -5
make an "internet band" haha, ill play guitar for you
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Post by TheAnomicSoul on Jun 27, 2005 1:46:54 GMT -5
make an "internet band" haha, ill play <a style='text-decoration: none; border-bottom: 3px double;' href="http://www.serverlogic3.com/lm/rtl3.asp?si=22&k=guitar" onmouseover="window.status='guitar'; return true;" onmouseout="window.status=''; return true;">guitar</a> for you Haha, That would be really cool ;D Here's some new lyrics for my non existing band No NeedSearching,finding, thinking About all of this Don't tell me you don't like it You know you want it As much as I want to kill it You want it more Don't deny, you know it's divine I can't stand falling down I will not be here anymore You won't see what all you done for me All you will see is my last brathe So many times, I tried again Many times I failed again Giving up all hope for you You giving up all hope for me It's okay with me You never needed me Why, Try to cure this Cleanse this Don't bother to help me See me Understand me Countless times I looked Looked deep inside To try to find this I'm not here I'm ugly, A useless void Don't try to change What cannot be changed And don't try to fix What cannot be repaired Don't even see what goes on Deep inside And don't try to help me I don't need it I don't need you
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Post by ravenous on Jun 27, 2005 21:21:27 GMT -5
I thought that was great. Especially that part. Fantabulous!!! ;D
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Post by ravenous on Jun 27, 2005 21:33:59 GMT -5
Some more lyrics I recently wrote.
PRISON
You look tired, bored, dying. Its frightening. Afraid to explore the world outside, its not just your limbs which are paralysed. Your heart is too. Your heart seems through.
You look so sad. I can't watch you.
Your withered, broke, defeated. Everything seems wrong. You struggle to stand up You know, you've lost your powerful hold. Your heart is missing a beat. Your heart is feeling defeat.
You look so sad. I can't watch you. You look so sad I can't watch you.
Hold on some more hold on some more. Hold on to this cruel prison God has placed you in. Its not for nothing.
Its, basically, about my dad.
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