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Post by TheAnomicSoul on Apr 26, 2005 15:23:45 GMT -5
ohh ok. I'm not an example much ;D Thanx and you are a very great poet as well.
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Post by voiceofgod on Apr 26, 2005 15:25:24 GMT -5
ohh ok. I'm not an example much ;D Thanx and you are a very great poet as well. Eh I'm mediocre at best, but thnx!  |
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Post by TheAnomicSoul on Apr 26, 2005 16:52:04 GMT -5
Coward Meets Demise
You are my lord of pain and misery
Take my rotting corpse to lucifers cemetary
Bury my remains and forget this man was here
Regardless of how much i hate you i will not reappear
For they are the ones who will meet thier demise
And thier poor family wont ever hear the goodbye
For I am the one who will take your unfortunate life away
And your god won't hear your pathetic pray
You will be slain before you can bow down
Then you will drown in your own blood
Look in my eyes and see death
Get ready to breath your last breathe
Close your eyes and take it like a man
For once be a man and follow my plan
No one will save you now your body will turn blue
Go ahed and scream to god because he can't hear you
Sad isnt it? You have nothing to die for
You wont hurt anyone anymore
For I kill to save the life of many
No need to tell Jenny where u are going
As your blood will be flowing out
She will know soon enough
Her tears will be shed on your worthless remains
And her own pain will bring her closer to you
Hear my voice that signals the end
Go and tell your best friend
He's life will suspend as well
Farewells told
Bodies turn cold
Then to mold
Like your life has become
Removal of the scum
Your body will turn numb
Before you see the light
Say goodnight
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Post by britany on Apr 26, 2005 18:10:56 GMT -5
That was great soul freaking keep it up The story keeps going on till there is a break in the silence....what has happened here standing on the moon's end. This is falling into the glem of dark that sets it on the horizon, lost in this stage think of what you have ended, You have not even opened your eye's...will it continue, the retribution for the sin's that are here, you have the choice that any one will have and yet choice not to take the cure, your out of the mind and casting this fear upon ever one that is with you and around you and you are so distant from me i don't know who is here..there is so much time that has been wasted and so much hate that has be risen...i think that this story is almost to the very end and the sun has been turned out for the last time...at the end you'll find your own destruction and see all the pain you have obtained now and forever will you be lifeless with out care and i'll still be right here. |
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Post by erishkigal on Apr 26, 2005 18:33:23 GMT -5
Britany, that was amazing, I love it
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Post by TheAnomicSoul on Apr 26, 2005 19:39:29 GMT -5
Wow that was great Brit. As always you write great poetry  |
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Post by Halo on Apr 26, 2005 20:42:03 GMT -5
Soul and Britany! I'm so proud of you guys.
You're expressing yourselves so well. Your talents are shining through.
Great job, both of you.
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Post by TheAnomicSoul on Apr 26, 2005 21:02:16 GMT -5
Thank you Halo |
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Post by erishkigal on Apr 26, 2005 21:05:48 GMT -5
Yeah thanks for the comments on my poem halo!!!
So thats how it is huh?
Everyone else gets "you're really shinning" and me like always just gets ignored. I guess it really is true then, everyone hates me!
Jokes, obviously....
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Post by britany on Apr 26, 2005 21:13:30 GMT -5
No i liked your poem no one hates you lol...but thank you halo a lot |
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Post by Halo on Apr 26, 2005 21:27:52 GMT -5
Yeah thanks for the comments on my poem halo!!! So thats how it is huh? Everyone else gets "you're really shinning" and me like always just gets ignored. I guess it really is true then, everyone hates me! Jokes, obviously.... Absolutely not dear. I just haven't gotten to all the poems yet. I read the last page and will move backwards. You know you are loved. |
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Post by erishkigal on Apr 26, 2005 22:01:04 GMT -5
Absolutely not dear. I just haven't gotten to all the poems yet. I read the last page and will move backwards. You know you are loved. Hugs for everyone! |
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Post by moneyisevil on Apr 27, 2005 12:16:09 GMT -5
<b>Rubber</b>
The receptors capture the glimpse of what’s left behind
Restless, thinking of what there is he must find
Or must fight
Or must do
In order to find the prize no one recalls
Realize the rails of deceit
Failed to remember
Overlooked without a thought
Which is no accident
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Post by britany on Apr 27, 2005 13:12:22 GMT -5
That was really good, I liked it a lot Keep it up!!! |
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Post by TheAnomicSoul on Apr 27, 2005 13:19:00 GMT -5
<b>Rubber</b> The receptors capture the glimpse of what’s left behind Restless, thinking of what there is he must find Or must fight Or must do In order to find the prize no one recalls Realize the rails of deceit Failed to remember Overlooked without a thought Which is no accident Yes very good as always |
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