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Post by moneyisevil on Apr 27, 2005 13:29:10 GMT -5
You've come to rip my heart out And take my life
I gave to you an open question Do you enjoy the pain and suffering you cause Because to me It seems like you enjoy hurting yourself and others
Still you recieve only partial pleasure Because you cant fucken love You can't fucken love You can't fucken love
You are shallow I am empty
I am shallow You are empty
You're biggest fear is that you fill confirm your theory
YOU ARE HOLLOW YOU ARE EMPTY
FUCK YOU FUCK YOU FUCK YOU FUCK YOU FOR YOUR EXISTENCE DEPLETING THE WORLD
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Post by TheAnomicSoul on Apr 27, 2005 13:58:15 GMT -5
^That was bad ass man. Very very great. I loved that one. I like the over usage of the word "fuck" ;D ;D
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Post by TheAnomicSoul on Apr 27, 2005 15:41:38 GMT -5
Stupid poem that dosent really mean anything
Untitled
The beast inside of me rages As i see you turning the pages You are my unbeatable enemy I try to fight you and fail Just throw me away Do it like a Teleban Cut my fucking head off man I throw myself in your torture chamber Givin up complely to rescue myself I'll sit and take the punishment Punishment for no reason Do you need one Just throw me away
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Post by Nessie on Apr 27, 2005 15:48:41 GMT -5
I don't think it's stupid at all... I like it, it seems to be very desperate
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Post by TheAnomicSoul on Apr 27, 2005 15:55:33 GMT -5
thank you. i dont think it is stupid either it's just that i was bored so i started writing it and it got done within like 2 minutes. I like putting thought into my writing. Thanks once again
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Post by Nessie on Apr 27, 2005 16:00:04 GMT -5
you know, I think those written-down-in-2-minutes-poems are the best. As soon as you start to read through it again and again, always changing something it won't be just the feeling you had at that moment when you thought to write a poem.
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Post by TheAnomicSoul on Apr 27, 2005 17:16:17 GMT -5
New song
Affliction to Saturn
How do you feel To steal my own stability Leaving me in this situation Draining my chances for any salvation Tearing me down Beating me to the ground Turning my smiles to frown Making me drown Tying me down
Paralyzing me Emotionally killing me Bringing me down Making me a clown Crushing my will
How does it feel To make me feel unreal Like evreything I've down I failed Depression sits in Rain clouds appear over me Shades shut Doors closed Looking into the eye of a decietful angel Grabs me and flies me away While you're still here...
Crushing me Choking me Beating me Physically killing me
How do you feel To see me now How does it feel To destroy To ruin To kill Evreything I've had
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Post by Halo on Apr 27, 2005 19:32:49 GMT -5
why seek the fire again? why seek the fire at all? I often wonder this myself. Very nice erish. I enjoyed that very much. Now, you need to start posting more of your work for us to enjoy.
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Post by britany on Apr 27, 2005 19:44:25 GMT -5
That was good soul i liked that you worte it in like..2 min. and i also like the title...
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Post by Halo on Apr 27, 2005 22:38:16 GMT -5
"Affliction to Saturn"
Great work soul!
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Post by erishkigal on Apr 27, 2005 23:19:02 GMT -5
I often wonder this myself. Very nice erish. I enjoyed that very much. Now, you need to start posting more of your work for us to enjoy. Thanks!!! maybe I will...I dont write an awful lot, I have difficulty like, revealing myself, I would never ever show anyone in "real life" a poem I wrote, or even let anyone know Ive even written a poem before.
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Post by Halo on Apr 28, 2005 8:45:52 GMT -5
Thanks!!! maybe I will...I dont write an awful lot, I have difficulty like, revealing myself, I would never ever show anyone in "real life" a poem I wrote, or even let anyone know Ive even written a poem before. Maybe writing would help you feel more comfortable about "revealing" yourself. In here you are kind of anonymous, although we all "know" and love you, posting here might make it easier for you than in "real life". I think it would be a great confidence booster for yourself. You might want to give it a try.
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Post by moneyisevil on Apr 28, 2005 11:34:09 GMT -5
I must resist Why can’t I remember this?
There is a line that must be drawn When people obey in fear The walls are built high To be never torn down
Comfort in the safeness of sorrow Kill my attachments Life is suffering Only through this can we grow Let go of what its inside Inhaled anger
The forest is dead Tell everyone that the forest is dead And so is all
Nourishment
They’ve gone and killed my brother They’ve gone and chained me down Anger fills me
I must resist Why can’t I remember this?
Love exists
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Post by TheAnomicSoul on Apr 28, 2005 12:43:09 GMT -5
"Affliction to Saturn" Great work soul! Thanks as always H.
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Post by TheAnomicSoul on Apr 28, 2005 16:20:48 GMT -5
Medicated Suicide
Hello, how are you I'm fine Thanks for asking I'm fine Don't mind I'm fine No need to worry I'm doing just fine
Look inside Read between the lines Look deeper See the lie Save me
Trick me Blind me Deciet me
Don't worry about me I'm ok Nothing is wrong Leave me alone I'm ok Get away from me I'm alright
Don't go away Cleanse me Release me from this beast Rescue me before I die
Doors closed Shades shutted Lights dimmed Medicated suicide
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