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Post by erishkigal on May 16, 2005 0:21:50 GMT -5
This is a rework of the last poem I wrote. I like it this way much beter. a moment of silent nostalgiaUnder a bleak grey sky this beach stretches fading beyond sight wave after wave crashes on the endless black shore as it has always donw, and always will
Now that the cold has returned the memories begin to fade, all the warmth discovered is silently erased
A cautious bird aimlessly floats above the ocean and pain that the gentle rain coats
Gazing into its obscure emptiness I find Even my oen eyes are confined Obscured and desperetely alone
Why seek the fire again? Why seek the fire at all.... if the rain and waves never endhere is a more recent one. Which, is kind of "before" the last one... Preperation of SolitudeTo days of ice and eternal rain Unaware of emptiness or pain Not yet aware but a fickle suspision that as hell, arcadia dwells
Between summer sweet sheets of rain black clouds my only friend encompassed with new pain I silently observed by known and decided end
There I saw dark horrors unfurl the creeping shadows was all the world preparing myself for all I ever knew I shut my mouth, crept back to silence and welcomed solitude wellExpect more in the same "story/concept" in the comming days/weeks What ya think? I like rain, heh.
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Post by erishkigal on May 16, 2005 4:26:57 GMT -5
I will probably re-work and further disfigure this poem. At the moment its a bit sloppy but thats okay its next in the series. a few more to be finished Called out of the mire by the vast oceansSuddenly everything I ever knew Crashed down before me! I ran out of the ruins To behold a new kind of rain
To a lonely sea port Among enemies and a myriad empty creatures There, she asked my help The fresh sun shower eclipsed all doubt, So serene, a strange peace and security There was that sky
Now protected by you One lay down and the rest scattered like jewels Perfection came with warm two And perfect it was - And I know you are so far away But you’re finally at call Your breath feels so warm And fills me
Basking in your tranquil glow Songs evocative of light An orchid wet with sweet spring rain The inner most sanctums night
Plans for coalescent sight away Keeping benighted dogs at bay Awaiting holy conjugate pair Cast out was all of winters fear
Two frozen hearts born out of dust Spat on the harpies and their envious lust Flawless and perfect ‘twas decay of this rust Built up over years of criminal lust
“For thee I give a ring of gold Nothing I want more than for you to hold Me and my fruits, my flowers are yours I’ll feed thee the waters of my flaws – Never leave me”<br> “Look at what has happened Benighted I am no more Winters frost has thawed; its end Its you, I’m saved from inner war – Never leave me”<br> Dominicide come forth, For elder pressures pry Opposite poles apart And left me weak and dry
Internal battles of nights insane Forgotten to be, winters pain Fulfill my yearning desirous rain Your oceans, orchids and waters Call my name…<br>
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Post by britany on May 16, 2005 19:59:06 GMT -5
Very good joel!! Keep up the good work
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Post by Halo on May 16, 2005 22:24:03 GMT -5
Those were great Erish. Thanks!
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Post by ravenous on May 19, 2005 6:13:21 GMT -5
Britany, Soul, Ravenous and VOG.....the last few pages of your work was wonderful. Praise to all of you and your creativity. Thankyou...x
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Post by Halo on May 19, 2005 16:35:41 GMT -5
Hey guys... I'm going to split this thread off. It's got a huge number of pages (thanks to all your wonderful creativity! , so I think we will leave this one to be viewed and I'll start a new thread, "The Poetry Thread, Part Two" and you can all post more great creations there. Happy posting!
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