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Post by TheAnomicSoul on Dec 8, 2005 22:26:20 GMT -5
haha, you rock more than me  |
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Post by SparrowsSoliloquy on Dec 10, 2005 22:56:52 GMT -5
Yeah I know.  Just kidding. YOU DO ROCK! |
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Post by TheAnomicSoul on Dec 10, 2005 23:23:24 GMT -5
Why thank you I'm lookin foward to reading more of your poems |
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Post by voiceofgod on Dec 13, 2005 10:03:59 GMT -5
"Smoke"
Her face like smoke lingers
Around the tips and curves of my tongue
Her name is in my words
And her love is in my curse
But she flies and she burns
Just like crazy smoke
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Post by voiceofgod on Dec 13, 2005 10:05:10 GMT -5
~Woman I Know~
Moons wash forth the strength to ask you
May I have the last dance in your heart?
I am fully awake surrounded by your quiet eyes
And I am learning to feel myself through you
The unmatched beauty of your face
Calms the restless ghosts within my soul
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Post by voiceofgod on Dec 13, 2005 10:05:51 GMT -5
"Freedom"
This land of the free
A big joke to me
Nothing is free
There’s nothing for me
Taking what isn’t ours
Taking what belongs to them
Selfish fish in a big black sea
Bloody hands hide the truth
And we surrender to ourselves
In this, our land of the free
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Post by TheAnomicSoul on Dec 13, 2005 14:36:41 GMT -5
Nice trio, VOG. Those are kick ass poems!
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Post by SparrowsSoliloquy on Dec 14, 2005 0:01:15 GMT -5
I agree.. ! Damn VOG! Thanks Kev.. Ill dig through my old journals and see what I can come up with:) I look forward to reading more of your poems too. You as well VOG:) |
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Post by voiceofgod on Dec 14, 2005 11:26:52 GMT -5
Nice trio, VOG. Those are kick ass poems! Thank you. Lately I have been trying to write long complex poems, but I only seem to come up with the small verses. But if it works it works. lol |
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Post by voiceofgod on Dec 14, 2005 11:27:26 GMT -5
I agree.. ! Damn VOG! I look forward to reading more of your poems too. You as well VOG:) As always....thank you m'lady. |
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Post by TheAnomicSoul on Dec 17, 2005 16:05:46 GMT -5
I re-did one of my past writings, or just put more emotion into it than I had before. I lost the past feelings in this situation, after thinking deeply and thinking more about it. I expelled the old feelings of sorrow and depression, replaced them with anger,curiousness, and guilt. Since that is now how I feel from this particular situation in my life. So here it is for you all to read. This is my new version.
Fallen Angels
So beautiful, so tender
So lost inside the dejected mind
Thought you would never surrender
Your skin feels more cold and turns into pale
Trying to hold onto the memories
Who am I to cure you, Did I fail
Who was I in the first place
I was apart of you
Floating above grace
And here I am
Looking like a fool
I knew you through and through
Until you threw your life away
A failure beyond recognition
It all rests on my shoulder
Praying to see your apparition
So gone and lost
Questioning what could have been
You're free at last
A line you crossed, a life you lost
Cast the feelings aside
No one even cared
Although, I cried and died
I never even cared
I fuckin tried
But the guilt hasn't left me
I truly thought I could heal you
Take your pain away, one kiss at a time
You acted like I never had a clue
I'm sorry I couldn't save you
I can only close my eyes to look at you
The memories will soon fade to dust
And fly out of my recollection in a gust
Into the pit of the forgotten souls
If I could only take it back
Change every thing I ever done
Maybe never came into your life
You would be here
But what would I care?
I never knew you
I ask myself if I ever did
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Post by SparrowsSoliloquy on Dec 19, 2005 23:23:57 GMT -5
Another amazing piece of work by Kevin:)
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Post by voiceofgod on Dec 20, 2005 15:03:45 GMT -5
Love
It is known to few
It is the nectar of life-
Which sticks to the veins of children
The elderly grasp for it’s embrace
Only to end up cold and dying quickly
Faster than the light it sweeps
Never lingering for longer than a glimpse
We wish upon it’s wings to have it
And we pray it finds us wounded
It can be a beautiful thing
Both pure and conceited in it’s jealousy
Whether gift or theft it sings to us
We can unwrap it’s silk foundations
But anything more than a peek is wasted
We are this creature
This word leaves us empty and wanting more
There is only one of it and we are many
Not enough to fill the void
And not enough to kill the hate
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Post by voiceofgod on Dec 20, 2005 15:21:39 GMT -5
A Night With A Nightmare
The spooks believe the ghosts are real
The circumstances break the wheel
The screen is lifted slightly back
As the dreams take a turn to black
No more fairies dancing glee
Flames consume the life of me
Nightmares whirl the wind away
And I have nothing left to say
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Post by SparrowsSoliloquy on Dec 24, 2005 13:46:10 GMT -5
Very good guys! Yall make me want to get back to writing! |
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Just kidding. YOU DO ROCK!