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Post by Nessie on Apr 28, 2005 16:24:37 GMT -5
wow anomic...sounds very real and scares me a little bit, honestly
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Post by TheAnomicSoul on Apr 28, 2005 16:27:33 GMT -5
Aww no need to be scared but i heard if it scares ppl then it must be good.
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Post by Nessie on Apr 28, 2005 16:31:16 GMT -5
it's really, really good!
I'm just a little bit sensitive on suicide that's all!
Very well done, really!
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Post by TheAnomicSoul on Apr 28, 2005 16:32:12 GMT -5
It's about bein addicted to something that kills you. Drugs,alcohol, or something like that. And the person using the drug is dening it
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Post by Nessie on Apr 28, 2005 16:48:17 GMT -5
anyway...it really touched me...
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Post by TheAnomicSoul on Apr 28, 2005 16:50:11 GMT -5
It's ok
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Post by Halo on Apr 28, 2005 19:55:48 GMT -5
Soul....that last one was amazing.
Thanks for sharing with us, once again.
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Post by TheAnomicSoul on Apr 29, 2005 17:49:51 GMT -5
Sheesh... I have been writing evrey single day. Well I get the urge to write. But I dont write thoughts, just poems or songs. So here's another...
Redeemer
Come... Take my hand This may be a little difficult to understand But come with me Walk with me Drop to your knees Bow your head And close your eyes Learn to pray Get your soul swipped away
You are nothing without me Belief in me and you will not fall Do as I say or you will burn Screaming in pain You will burn!!!
I died for you So follow me I was beaten for you So walk with me Live your own life by me Or you wont have a life Do as I say or you will die Dont even wonder why Don't doubt me Don't think for yourself Give your life to me And follow my rules
You are nothing without me All you have to do is evreything I tell you You are hollow without me Follow my rules or die Die and burn Forever, Forever Die and burn For eternity
I'm your friend You are my child I'll cast my child out and let him suffer All because you didnt follow my rules All you have to do is change what you are And live like me Believe in me Follow me and my ways Or you can burn Burn for eternity I can make your life into shit But dont you ever question me My plan is for you to be in pain Dont question me Don't doubt me
You arent shit without me You are my slave Live like me and believe in me And you'll be ok Just do what I say And be my slave
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Post by britany on Apr 29, 2005 17:57:16 GMT -5
HEY soul that was great i love to read your poems please keep writing!
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Post by erishkigal on Apr 29, 2005 17:58:02 GMT -5
Quite contradictory to my own opinion, but nice writing, Soul...passionate...
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Post by TheAnomicSoul on Apr 29, 2005 18:10:10 GMT -5
Thanks to you both I've been writing way to much latley. I need to take a break. i'm not pushing myself to write though I wait for it to come to me but I just write way to much.
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Post by voiceofgod on May 1, 2005 6:58:47 GMT -5
"COIL" She keeps my nuts inside a vice She keeps me heavily sedated This sweet emotion eminates from me As I bleed externally Everybody talks at once Confusion spreads like fire But she won't let me answer My actions need explaining Manifest excuses May I be excused? She holds me on a short leash She radiates my only hate Her attributes are shown Plastic face and silicone As I laugh off the tremors Hatred grows to perfect simmer But she doesn't get the point My actions need convinction Slowly drop the knife May I murder you? Heart as dark As black as coal Wrap my blade around it's soil Let it end the suffering of every living man
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Post by TheAnomicSoul on May 2, 2005 13:38:09 GMT -5
^Wow that one is awesome VOG. I love the name. Very real. Great job as always
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Post by Halo on May 2, 2005 14:56:47 GMT -5
Once again...way to go VOG! You guys all amaze me. And I have to say (I know I've said this before) I'm very proud of you all. You have taken to expressing yourselves so well. Keep it up!
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Post by erishkigal on May 2, 2005 15:47:42 GMT -5
that was fucking rad!
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