ravenous
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Post by ravenous on May 6, 2005 6:48:08 GMT -5
Father.
I hold a thousand tears, I Sigh my frozen breath, I try to watch your fears, Bring you closer to death. There is nothing left, Pain wells in your eyes, My emotions a drowning mess At your waiting demise. But dad, you are here still And I treasure the time As you weaken through ill I am here by your side.
And another. I don't like this one much.
Metal coil.
Twisting round my finger, the coil is ripping skin. Pulling at my teather, I want you to pull me under. Then I can realise you, Then I can patrenise you, Like you did with me This coil you wrap me in.
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Post by TheAnomicSoul on May 6, 2005 21:08:05 GMT -5
I like them both ravenous. Great writing:)
Serenade
I would give it all up and die for her And only her No one else matches up to her Her wonderful beauty That makes me stare in ah There is nothing i wouldint do for her To make her smile & laugh To have her feel loved She is a gift I feel un-worthy of She holds my heart and my soul I hold her beautiful soul and tender heart For she is the one I desire She is the one I crave for and want I need her to feel alive To be happy Cause with her i am happy And without her I am sad Nothing in this world matters But her She makes me feel loved In a way I cannot describe I only want her
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Post by britany on May 6, 2005 21:11:19 GMT -5
Freaking soul that is really good i love it awwwwww it is sweet keep writing poems like that and stuff awwwww
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ravenous
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Post by ravenous on May 6, 2005 21:30:15 GMT -5
I like them both ravenous. Great writing:) SerenadeI would give it all up and die for her And only her No one else matches up to her Her wonderful beauty That makes me stare in ah There is nothing i wouldint do for her To make her smile & laugh To have her feel loved She is a gift I feel un-worthy of She holds my heart and my soul I hold her beautiful soul and tender heart For she is the one I desire She is the one I crave for and want I need her to feel alive To be happy Cause with her i am happy And without her I am sad Nothing in this world matters But her She makes me feel loved In a way I cannot describe I only want her Thank you and that was really good by the way. I thought it was quite dark and obssesive. Beautiful.
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Post by erishkigal on May 7, 2005 16:07:29 GMT -5
very pretty
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Post by britany on May 7, 2005 16:36:42 GMT -5
I sit in this place and they keep coming back i tried to erase them but they are here to stay with me. They sit in the four corners in here looking at me through the Mirror's , i just think in my mind does any body really care. I am asking for help but these people around keep setting me back there again to this sad place, sending me to the cold dark rooms. I try to keep the light on but that breaks too, it rise's to another day, still staying here i wonder if it is real i have no idea's of what is. I have no other way to get from them, i just keep think it will get better but it never will that i know in my heart. I fear that i will give up soon to them, i just keep think it will turn out ok it will go in the other direction to save me. Finally the Mirror's breaks, i won't be here, in here i be with them forever in the dark.
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Post by britany on May 7, 2005 16:46:39 GMT -5
Oh crap i spelled something wrong well....it is really Mirror in the poem hahaha ooops
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Post by Halo on May 8, 2005 11:24:42 GMT -5
You can edit your own posts Britany. Just go to the "modify" button and make any changes you want.
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Post by TheAnomicSoul on May 8, 2005 21:17:04 GMT -5
Voiceless
I speak with no voice I scream without a sound So as i die You won't hear me cry There's no ears to here what I got to say No one will listen I've been crucified for speaking my voice Ridiculed for voicing my opinion Casted into the darkness of solitude For speaking my mind Now these thoughts swarm my mind These resentful and angry thoughts Thoughts I thought I'd never have Now I ask God at night to take my life away But he dosent give me what I ask for There must be something to live for Why live with no voice Going overlooked Feeling hollow and passed over With no feelings of emotion What is there to live for Is there anything to die for I'll die soon enough For speaking what I believe
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Post by britany on May 8, 2005 21:21:28 GMT -5
That was GREAT!!! i love your poems very very good soul...now post another one
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Post by TheAnomicSoul on May 8, 2005 21:23:35 GMT -5
haha thanks
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Post by britany on May 8, 2005 21:35:27 GMT -5
Yup i juat want to say this is a great thread and it's nice to get feedback.
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Post by erishkigal on May 8, 2005 23:33:40 GMT -5
That was cool Britany, Like always I had to turn off the music I was listening to to read your poems better (as in I like to focus on the poem because I like them...) I liked this part, FOREVER IN THE DARK Finally the Mirror's breaks, i won't be here, in here i be with them forever in the dark.
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Post by TheAnomicSoul on May 9, 2005 17:24:08 GMT -5
Yea that was a great poem Brit. You are a very talented writer. Keep it up
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Post by TheAnomicSoul on May 9, 2005 17:26:59 GMT -5
Took it All (Letter to the Sky Pt.2)
I'm standing at this place In disbelief of what is now Why did you do this How could you take something so precious away Now all i can do is reminisce Now I can't help but look away from you
You gave us this gift Only to rip it away from us Evreyone loved him The only man I could trust Is ripped away from me
I'm looking at this stone I cant believe this is how it is Wondering why you took him away I dont look to the sky no more I ask you why you did this And all you do is ignore me This emptiness is closing in on me Cant put the peices together On why this star isnt shining
You ripped him away Called him back to your home He didnt do anything wrong Was our happiness too much That you had to rip him away from us
Our smiles have turned into frowns Our happy eyes are now tears Without him my life is nothing He didnt do anything wrong He didnt drive the nails in But yet you rip him away He was happy here But you took him away from us I will never understand why You take the only things that make life worth while
I look to the sky In hope to see his face But now the rain poors down You never told me why You took this gift This gift of life You never had a reason To take him away
I still have no clue On why you took Him away The one thing In this fucked life That made living worth it Now he's gone Without a reason It wasnt his time He was still young With evreything to live for But no he's gone Why is it That the good die young You dont want this world happy So you take the good as they are young To make the people who loved them Cry in saddness Wondering why They went like this You slay the ones who brighten the world For your own happiness And you make it sound alright When you crush the feelings of people And it's alright? Why do you have to take them Make this make sence Give me some clarity You wont You have no reason
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