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Post by erishkigal on Apr 23, 2005 15:54:48 GMT -5
Britany, I like the one you did in "one" minute as opposed to the one you did in "two" minutes, but they are quite nice Now should we see what you can do if you spend a lot of time on one?
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Post by Halo on Apr 23, 2005 23:55:11 GMT -5
I liked your "one minute" one a lot Brit. Just imagine what you could do if you took a little more time.
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Post by britany on Apr 24, 2005 9:47:13 GMT -5
Thank you halo...but ya know some times i have to go fast b/c when i think ...i think and write it down and put it together but really i should try to take more time
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Post by TheAnomicSoul on Apr 24, 2005 18:35:53 GMT -5
Loooong ass song
Lectoria
Look at yourself Living in the light Evreyone falls before you You hear it enough But yet you still crave Still want Still feene Like a un-healthy drug You still lust Still starve Still desire It never gets old Never gets boring You still thirst for those 3 words
"You are pretty" Fuck it all Look at yourself Get over it Narcissistic beauty queen Drown in your praise Choke on the worship
Keep craving Keep wanting The compliments It's getting a little tiring And you are inspiring me To hate you even more All the adore You attention whore I'm getting sick of you Craving the praise I'm getting tired of you Starving for commendation You make me sick You egotistic Self-loving white slave Get over yourself Put you on the shelf Don't look my way for approval You are already a failure in my eyes In my eyes
I can't stand you I hate you Go away And dont look my way You won't find what you're looking for here You're insencire Afraid of the fear That no one will adore you No one will praise you Get over it Nothing lasts forever
What more can I say You won't go away Never find a way To stray Your egotistic ways What more can I do To show you I hate you I despise you I hate the sight of you Find someone else to cater Your craving desires Find the suppliers To nurture Your want Your so called need Keep feeding your monster I won't be there to hold you high I'll leave without a goodbye Cause you're not even worthy of it
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Post by Halo on Apr 24, 2005 18:39:40 GMT -5
Soul, that was great!!
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Post by TheAnomicSoul on Apr 24, 2005 18:43:47 GMT -5
Thank you
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Post by britany on Apr 24, 2005 18:47:01 GMT -5
HEY i loved that soul...great JOB
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Post by TheAnomicSoul on Apr 24, 2005 19:10:59 GMT -5
Thank you as well Britany. I've been in a writers block for awhile and all the stuff that i've been holding in is just coming out. Here's another poem. I dont really like this one cause I dont like to write about love.
Without You
I lay down Dreaming of you Wishing you were here By my side Holding my cold hand But your gone The distance eats away at me Hold me with a sound Kiss me with a letter Alone and without you I love you and you love me And yet we're alone Craving to be together This life is hollow without you Holding me Kissing me The sounds fade away The letters tare Without you is punishment no one should bare I'm punishing myself My dreams still revolve around you All i want is to hold you And all i want is you here to hold me
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Post by britany on Apr 24, 2005 20:59:07 GMT -5
awww that's a really good one and it's cute awww keep it up please
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Post by TheAnomicSoul on Apr 24, 2005 21:09:35 GMT -5
No More Love Poems!!!!
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Post by britany on Apr 24, 2005 21:11:51 GMT -5
awww why, please their cute come on...
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Post by TheAnomicSoul on Apr 24, 2005 21:40:58 GMT -5
My early poetry was all about love,tainted love, or about a certain person i love/loved. I don't write that stuff anymore cause I rarly feel like that emotion. Now I write about whatever comes to mind. Rather it be about childhood or other ppls issues. I write from a observing perspective than focusing on my own problems. But if a love poem comes to mind then I'll write it
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Post by Halo on Apr 24, 2005 23:59:17 GMT -5
I Don't Need Love [/b] I don’t need love Just…… Lie to me Tell me all is okay Don’t turn away Until I believe what you say I don’t need truth A fairy tale will do Tell me something Just to get me through I don’t need love Just….. Fake the laugh And make me smile Pretend you care To make me feel worthwhile Give me false security To weather this storm Hide your chill So I can feel warm I don’t need love Just….. Take me (I’ll let you go) I need to feel something Wrap me up (in all the cliches) I want to hear my heart to sing Pretend you believe in me To make me feel whole Show me concern (you can fake it) To help repair my soul I don’t need love Just…. Hold me (Just until..) The pain goes away Take my hand (just for a moment..) Til the demons are at bay But, I don’t need love.
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Post by voiceofgod on Apr 25, 2005 10:21:02 GMT -5
this really sucks, but it's almost the only thing i've written in a long while *sigh*
lunacy pays the bills diplomacy is over welcomed i drown in this green the money machine guillotine counterfeited counter parts peers of broken handshakes we’re too crazy for separation again i feed my second head and let his voice lie with burnt words i search for answers they’re missing here i need to flee the boredom my worth in gold more than your weight in protest you can’t resolve what isn’t bent you can’t repair what i resent the fog is breaking, i’m stepping through say hello to sanity
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Post by TheAnomicSoul on Apr 25, 2005 12:32:11 GMT -5
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