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Post by voiceofgod on Apr 25, 2005 12:34:01 GMT -5
Halo that was beautiful Really amazing. Just wow that's all I can really say about that poem. It's amazing. Great job VOG that was an awesome poem. I really liked that one alot. Great job. Such amazing poets in this forum thanks man. it's not much, but at least i got over my writer's block
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Post by TheAnomicSoul on Apr 25, 2005 12:37:19 GMT -5
Yea same here. I was in one for almost 2 months but now it's coming out
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Post by TheAnomicSoul on Apr 25, 2005 16:15:43 GMT -5
Last Goodbye
On the 7th i said goodbye Looked to the sky Trying to fight the cry I wiped the tear from my eye I hoped it was a lie All I did was deny I kept wondering why I still hope he will pass by To say hi My blood inside turns dry But I Cannot cry This is my last goodbye
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Post by voiceofgod on Apr 25, 2005 16:19:14 GMT -5
Last GoodbyeOn the 7th i said goodbye Looked to the sky Trying to fight the cry I wiped the tear from my eye I hoped it was a lie All I did was deny I kept wondering why I still hope he will pass by To say hi My blood inside turns dry But I Cannot cry This is my last goodbye nicely done A-Soul. I'm glad we're back in the mix! lol
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Post by Nessie on Apr 25, 2005 18:01:26 GMT -5
Anomic...it's really admirable, how you found all those y-rhymes and it even makes a lot of sense I like it...well done
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Post by voiceofgod on Apr 25, 2005 18:03:10 GMT -5
Anomic...it's really admirable, how you found all those y-rhymes and it even makes a lot of sense I like it...well done of course it makes sense. a-soul is king of the poetry thread. lol
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Post by moneyisevil on Apr 25, 2005 18:25:01 GMT -5
REALLY REALLY GOOD WORK EVERYONE
okay...
I want so bad to be beside you But I realize then there would be two So I struggle impatiently to be inside you
Consistency swallows Desperation follows
Levitating time Make up the mind Collision
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Post by voiceofgod on Apr 25, 2005 18:26:04 GMT -5
I like that MIE. Good work. The first two lines are really cool.
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Post by voiceofgod on Apr 25, 2005 18:38:14 GMT -5
here's one I just wrote. not all that great, but here we go.......
melting through an afternoon the clouds come in to play with you and all the while the storms of me are breaking thoughts accordingly this weather pattern leaves a trail of memories and times to tell without seasons we are lost but within them we pay the cost rain or shine we hate the life we choose to lead we choose to die see you in the rainbow’s might until we drive upon the night
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Post by SparrowsSoliloquy on Apr 25, 2005 19:08:20 GMT -5
Its interesting so see so many people say that they dont think what they wrote was all that.. and Im sitting back reading it and thinking how amazing everybody is..! you all have talent so pat yourselves on the back! maybe one day Sparrow will get around to posting one of her poems..:)have a nice night everybody!..Sparrow
ps...WELL done to ALL of you!!
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Post by britany on Apr 25, 2005 19:15:21 GMT -5
I like all the poem's just keep the good work up..and i'm just glad that there is this thread..and i just love it...keep on a writing
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Post by TheAnomicSoul on Apr 25, 2005 20:56:41 GMT -5
of course it makes sense. a-soul is king of the poetry thread. lol Lol that was very nice of you. I dont think so though but I'm sure u were bein sarcastic. All the poets here are amazing. Very awesome and conceptual. Some ppl here inspired me on somem of my own work.
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Post by erishkigal on Apr 26, 2005 7:11:03 GMT -5
Under a bleak grey sky The beach stretches for miles wave after wave crashes along the endless black shore, for alltid
Now that the cold has returned reflecting back I have forgotten the feeling of warmth
A lone seagull struggles against the wind not even these eyes are as one, not twins not unified staring into a cold bleack new dawn
why seek the fire again? why seek the fire at all?
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Post by TheAnomicSoul on Apr 26, 2005 13:00:56 GMT -5
^^Great poem That was really good. And thanx for the comments on my poem.
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Post by voiceofgod on Apr 26, 2005 13:20:39 GMT -5
Lol that was very nice of you. I dont think so though but I'm sure u were bein sarcastic. All the poets here are amazing. Very awesome and conceptual. Some ppl here inspired me on somem of my own work. No sarcacism intended. I was only saying that you post in here alot. You're a very talented poet. Everyone here is very amazing at writing, I was just using you as an example. lol
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