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Post by britany on Aug 5, 2005 18:57:30 GMT -5
Aww that was great soul now go go go write more lol
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cmac
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Post by cmac on Aug 5, 2005 21:00:17 GMT -5
TWISTER You could call it a tornado of thoughts Sucked in, against will Everything is so fast This spinning around I can see myself now As I go up I'm looking away Only to come round To be looking back that way Then Right at the end I'm shot out of this tube To finally float A weightless acrobat of issues Hoping only, to land on my back So I will look up When this natural disaster does pass
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Post by Demonic) 66Ty6 (Darkness on Aug 5, 2005 22:25:09 GMT -5
kool
thats a rad insight but does it have soemthing deeper in it i cant see. there are only two clues i picked up upon but yea im guessing its just about you goin around in circles and denying the same things but yet they are thrown in your face??? possably i dont know im drunk ;D
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Post by Demonic) 66Ty6 (Darkness on Aug 5, 2005 22:28:28 GMT -5
Fuck yea anomic i like that one heaps;D
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Post by Halo on Aug 6, 2005 0:37:44 GMT -5
cmac: I really liked "Twister"! You have described perfectly how I have felt many times! Thanks for posting it.
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Post by TheAnomicSoul on Aug 6, 2005 17:33:40 GMT -5
Without
There's a time in my life I try to forget Screams echo through my ear Try to get away The shit seems to follow
I could die tonight Don't cry I can die tonight Would you say "good-bye"? Or let me die in your memories
You are the reason this is fucked For the shit you done To ruin this place You are a discrace But I will always love you I'm your son, You may forget I can't find the feelings inside To look past
I can die tonight Am I out of your sight It's not alright A empty "goodnight"
I hate you Can you this pain I hate you Do you feel a thing I hate you Can you feel this pain I hate you Do you feel a thing
Another tainted memory Just go away Why stay Where you don't wanna be You been here And yet you never done a thing Just dissapear After you scream in my ear Make this fog clear
I hate you Can you this pain I hate you Do you feel a thing I hate you Can you feel this pain I hate you Do you feel a thing
Why I'll always love you Gone You turned away Neglect You just threw me away With your thoughtless feelings
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Post by Demonic) 66Ty6 (Darkness on Aug 6, 2005 21:41:46 GMT -5
dude u must have lot of free tiem on ur hands or like be inlove with creativity which ever it is u might possably have a future with this stuff eh its good shit
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Post by TheAnomicSoul on Aug 6, 2005 23:29:41 GMT -5
Haha thanks man. I think it's both. I love creating new writings and expressing shit and i am also bored alot and have alot of free time
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Post by Demonic) 66Ty6 (Darkness on Aug 7, 2005 18:19:52 GMT -5
fair enough. oh well all i have to say is keep up the good work
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ravenous
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Post by ravenous on Aug 11, 2005 20:28:10 GMT -5
These poems of yours anomic just keep getting better and better. They are great to read. I also really liked 'Twister', cmac. These are a few recent lyrics/poems/rants about my current situtaion in my own battle with my emotions. Hope you like them.
INFESTED.
Tumbling into a fire a mess of my own paranoia, While keeping you distant from me.
(chorus) All this time I pulled you down too. All this time I was tightly holding onto you.
It doesn't change my feelings. It doesn't make life easier I still hurt myself inside so the scars will not show.
(Chorus)
I'm lying underneath this dirt I only make thicker. Infested meat with no flavour Dirty until the end. I'm lying to everyone pretending that I'm ok. I'm not ok. One more ego to determine. I'll break my own heart in the end.
I HAVE TO LIVE.
A new arrival is promised to me. A new way of thinking clearly. I won't expect a single thing Thats a suicidal way of thinking.
Hope comes before disappointment, Hurt before the end.
A better way of existing A bitter lie i've been twisting, Its a pointless selfish anecdote denying that you are alive.
Hope comes before disappointment love before the end.
I have to live I have to remove my mask. I have to live. I don't want to finish Last.
As always...Questions...just ask. x
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Post by Halo on Aug 11, 2005 23:10:20 GMT -5
ravenous! Good to see you here and thanks for posting more of your writing. As usual I thoroughly enjoyed them!
I hope you are winning that battle of emotions. That can be a very hard thing. I hope your writing and putting your emotions in to that helps.
And we're all here for you too!
Lots of Love!
Halo
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Post by voiceofgod on Aug 12, 2005 9:11:58 GMT -5
Grudges
Whose to say it didn't happen? Who can say it wasn't there? I watched it crash around you But I didn't expect to find you well I thought the wave had cleaned the slate But you're still holding grudges We're too old for this now child We're too old to let this go So for now just rest and stay with me Until our broken wings are mended I promise I will save a breath for you So we can gasp for air together
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ravenous
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Post by ravenous on Aug 13, 2005 21:15:42 GMT -5
Thanks Halo. I'm having a good go at my fickle, sensitive, inner self. I can't see a light at the end of the emotional tunnel yet but I'll keep riding through it. I'm determined enough. And I'll come out at the end. Unscathed I hope. Anyway...thanks again. Love to you (all) too. And VOG I really liked 'grudges'. Very deep. xx
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Post by TheAnomicSoul on Aug 14, 2005 0:58:40 GMT -5
Very good, Ravenous. I LOVE IT!!! It is very relative to me. Great job!
I Am
I don't want this to be I don't want to slip away I just want things To be like they were Before I knew you Before I seen you
How can this be? I thought I knew I never knew I never had a clue All my answers are rejected Thrown away
I am dead I am blind I have bled Hate and pain become intertwined From you I'll fuckin desecrate you
Come and step inside See the world through my eyes Know my thoughts Feel my pain Don't throw me away this early For once, Give me a mother fuckin chance
I am hurt I am slain I am dirt (to you) It will rain Cutting my veins Am I sane I am insane!
I hate you You hate me Go fuck yourself I hate you I hate you I hate you
I am dead I am blind I have bled Hate and pain become intertwined From you I'll fuckin desecrate you
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Post by moneyisevil on Aug 15, 2005 23:00:57 GMT -5
There will be a series of three pieces that go together. The Beginning, The Middle, and The End.
The Beginning ------------------ Empty eyes look away. Injustice without forgiveness Down and Out again. Hands forced to pray. Opression forced on their plate.
A little pride in a flag washed white Small hands against the tide fight.
Natice life stripped of privelage. There's no sacrifice just keep taking more and more. 'Cuz there's no difference between your love and your hate. Keep digging 'till it ends up too late.
Feelings rise again, disgusting stare. Deep breathes are heavy. Waiting to release boiled air.
It's the way.
Lead yourself it's the least you could do.
Forget the chains of thought. Sterilization of the nations. You have the fucken money, you not a sperate thought in your brain. Money, money, money, money It's all the fucken same. Money, money, money, money Is always the last to blame
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