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Post by moneyisevil on Aug 15, 2005 23:01:33 GMT -5
*Natice = Native
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Post by TheAnomicSoul on Aug 16, 2005 9:19:01 GMT -5
I love that, Money. Kick ass shit right there!
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Post by ravenous on Aug 17, 2005 20:54:16 GMT -5
Very good, Ravenous. I LOVE IT!!! It is very relative to me. Great job! Thank you. I liked yours too. Also Money is evil....The beginning...beautiful. Another new one from me. HOW DO I LIVE? I believe myself when I say I'm better off feeling this way I don't pay attention to the voice that screams, "Your a liar. You don't know what you need." I've forgotten how I got here. I've forgotten how to live.Am I really living others lives because I care too much? Or am I just afraid of my own? There is so much inside of me, But I'm too tight to let it go. I've forgotten how I got here. I've forgotten how to live.I'm down then I'm up again I'm down then I'm up again. I'm down then I'm up again. I'm down then I'm up again. A never ending cycle. A never ending repeat. It hurts sometimes. But I'm so numb I can't feel the pain.xx
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Post by cmac on Aug 17, 2005 21:02:19 GMT -5
Money, I like that. Cant wait to read the rest. The Last Time Get a grip in this dont slip Get a grip in this dont slip Get a grip in this dont slip Little at a time While the mind is in its prime And no reason why I really dont want to Lose the the self control I know the resons to say no But that really doent matter right now Because, I got what it takes To get back to the place I was That I call the first time And when I get there I'll let out all my air And claim that it was the last time Get a grip in this dont slip Get a grip in this dont slip Lets wear our lying eyes Our thoughs between our thighs So I can see if you really want to Find the hidden me I reveal so easily But you really dont care right now Because, We had and we tried To see past all our lies That we said the very first time Fake We dont mind Find a hand in mine And we'll claim this is the last time Get a grip in this dont slip Losing peace of mind Notice the decline And I know you didnt mean to Lose your self control You tried to let it go But that really doesn't matter right now Because, I have what it takes To get back to the place I am that I call the first time So, When you raise your fist I'm gonna tell you this That is gonna be the last time
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Post by cmac on Aug 17, 2005 21:07:11 GMT -5
Ravenous, that is great. I like the personal questions in it, and the ending
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Post by ravenous on Aug 18, 2005 18:51:55 GMT -5
Ravenous, that is great. I like the personal questions in it, and the ending Thank you. I really enjoyed yours too. I can feel myself falling into it, as if I wrote it myself. I relate so much to it. Your a great writer.
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Post by moneyisevil on Aug 19, 2005 19:25:32 GMT -5
good joc cmac...enjoyed that shit....
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Post by TheAnomicSoul on Aug 21, 2005 23:08:20 GMT -5
Non-Titled Anti War/Government song
Wake up to another beautiful day in America Turn on the news to find you lost your daughter Erica In this sensless war we shouldin't be fightin To many people dead, Where should I begin He dodged Vietnam but sent the young to die In a war he fuckin started, But he couldin't get the balls To defend the nation he claims he loves Every fuckin word you here is a lie So how can I be proud to be an American When this country is ran by a fuckin hypocrital coward On November 2nd, Did you vote for more explosions Did you go out and vote for more bloodshed Did you vote to lose your friends and family In this war we have no bussiness in He just wants his oil and his green Get your bitch ass out of your chair, grab a gun And fight this shit your damn self We have lives to live People we love who need us But yet you send us out To be killed for your own avarice Fuck you, Fuck the government I hope you fucking choke on your lies
You turn on the tv, once again To see and hear only half the truth We are lied to every day We must keep our mind closed or we find out the truth The truth the government is tryin to hide Brainwashed Americans live day by day Living content cause the think it will be okay Smiling when they know, The innocent is dying More families are crying Another 4 year old son won't see his father come home The next time he sees him, He'll be laying in a fuckin coffin I had my own friends go down fightin this pointless war And for what? There is no justifying this shit You can't alleviate the reasons for this fucked up war A mother cries on her hands and knees, she lost her son You turn the other cheak, Ignoring the pleading sounds You say your trying to find the weapons of Mass Destruction Can't you see? You are the fuckin weapon of mass destruction
Monopolizing,self-righteous,lying, no good hypocrite How can you lie to the face of this nation Send out the young to fight when you couldin't yourself You believe what you say is right You say you love America, Then stop fuckin killing us Send our troops back home, eventhough we lost thousands already Kids need a mother and father, They can't die in this war Clinton lied about fuckin his whore Nobody died when Clinton lied Little daugher places a stamp on a envelope A letter to her father, But don't worry, She doesnt know anything She doesn't know her father can be near death We are supposed to relax and think all is well Fuck that! Let's get a back bone Fight and fight til we get our troops back home
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Post by cmac on Aug 21, 2005 23:45:35 GMT -5
WOW!, anomic that is really good. Blunt. Cant argue with a no bullshit write. Good job.
Sun Down
Braided fingers Tired eyes Did, and Dig then Dig Try, and Cry then Cry
Wombed to a tomb
Lying in a creek bed The water trickles by By smooth sound Rhythm, even Dancing my words As Moon drips of my rising skin A pale broken back The one that picks you up
I found the blueprints today. The one of me. The vision in childhood infancy. The one I sought to be.
The writeless one, the drinkless one, the pointing fingersless one, the “I told you so” less one, the don’t go in that roomless one, the I’m loosing youless one, the lets start overless one, the this isn’t plannedless one.
All that is gone. I ripped those plans apart. But, between me and you, I think we can work something out. I have a few pieces that you can match up. As long as you iron out the yellow corners curled up.
Then I’ll show you
This blended bandaged This broken bleeding Heart Cradled In Busy borderline Burnt breath taking mourning
As I stand on my Marsh covered knees Put my Trembling fist back in the sea A cloud covers the moon Casting a shadow of doubt We may never work things out
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Post by ravenous on Aug 22, 2005 19:04:27 GMT -5
Great rant Anomic. And cmac, that was beautiful. I'll say it again, your a great writer. I love your stuff. This is a new one. I recently wrote these lyrics for an acostic melody me and my sister came up wth.
TO YESTERDAY.
Take this from me I've given everything to free myself from hurting. If I can't be real what can I be? What will I be? Empty.
Look to the light Straight ahead Don't look back to yesterday.
I find in hope a way back down to somewhere else that feels okay. It's been a while since I..... Did I let you go? Have I let you go? Moved on.
Look to the light Straight ahead Don't look back to yesterday
It felt better yesterday.
I know it felt better yesterday but its gone its gone.
It felt better....
yesterday.
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Post by moneyisevil on Aug 22, 2005 19:19:14 GMT -5
here will be a series of three pieces that go together. The Beginning, The Middle, and The End.
The Beginning ------------------ Empty eyes look away. Injustice without forgiveness Down and Out again. Hands forced to pray. Opression forced on their plate.
A little pride in a flag washed white Small hands against the tide fight.
Natice life stripped of privelage. There's no sacrifice just keep taking more and more. 'Cuz there's no difference between your love and your hate. Keep digging 'till it ends up too late.
Feelings rise again, disgusting stare. Deep breathes are heavy. Waiting to release boiled air.
It's the way.
Lead yourself it's the least you could do.
Forget the chains of thought. Sterilization of the nations. You have the fucken money, you not a sperate thought in your brain. Money, money, money, money It's all the fucken same. Money, money, money, money Is always the last to blame
The Middle -----------------
There was no memory held Not a single trace was found
Inside the illusion of pain Its cycle trained to come and come and come again
The fire in your hear Led you to the start When you met again the future and the end
You never understand the consequences of what you do
Break down Point your finger at my soul Allow to shed some light Blinded by anger That suits you well I don't see you any other way
Revoloution RevoloutionCome back Allow me to raise the dead Barley able to move Restricted by your presence
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Post by TheAnomicSoul on Aug 22, 2005 23:36:33 GMT -5
^That's really good.
Not You
I understand this Eventhough I hate this I know how it must be I don't want to swallow this It was good, Only for me Not for you, You didn't want this So now I'm gone, Thrown away Cold and hungry, Hollow and hated
How could you play me Make me feel so good How could you taint me Taking it all away How can I find someone like you There isn't no one
Things in life don't come by easily The best things in life are meant to be taken away Why was this only my time Why can't I feel like this without you And every fuckin thing I feel Is back to the way it was I don't blame you I just fuckin hate this inside
Why did you do this I understand how you feel But I cannot ignore what I feel inside How could you play me I'm sorry for all I have to be sorry for I'm not mad, I can't blame you I cannot deny what I have inside
I can't see through the gray clouds in my mind I cannot find my way back to the light I'm stuck, Once again in here I cannot free myself I can taste my life this time I try to take it all away in vain I don't hate you I just hate how I feel now I cannot blame you for this I understand your reasons I just can't take anymore
How could you play me Make me feel so good How could you taint me Taking it all away How can I find someone like you There isn't no one
I hate this I hate myself I'm dumb I'm sick I'm ugly I hate myself I don't hate you Only myself I cannot hate you
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Post by Halo on Aug 23, 2005 19:11:35 GMT -5
I got so far behind on reading this thread!
You guys are all so great! This may be an MJK site, but you guys and your art is what makes it special to me.
Thanks everyone.
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Post by ravenous on Aug 23, 2005 19:49:36 GMT -5
Moneyisevil and Anomic, I thought they were great poems. I really enjoyed reading them. Can't wait for more. And Halo, its nice to be able to share stuff like this to someone who appreciates it. Its hard to find people like that. x
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Post by TheAnomicSoul on Aug 23, 2005 23:55:58 GMT -5
It's Time
Tonight is harder than the last Grab my gun and make it blast Leave my brains and blood behind I ain't going to hide this pain for another night What's the point of waking up Ain't nobody got a heart no more Whoever walks in my room next I'll be layin on the floor My core has been tainted from the start Now I feel it's time to depart
Time to go, Don't say goodbye Time to fly, Fly away from here Everyday is the same Time to fly away in search for the after life
Evil thoughts surround my mind My funeral is all I can dream about Darkened thoughts that could put me away The truth will be revealed to the oblivious All I can think about is how fake my obituary will be Lies to make me sound better that I actually am Hollowed and deceitful psychologists Fake ass people tell me it ain't worth it With everybody's time I'm taking up All you should know I had enough Blocking out the phonies and liars Putting metal into my head Now you'll see my blood is red Now you'll see me as one of the dead
It's time to leave here Flying with the angels Watching above the people who share my same tears To all the people who had concern Know I'm alright now It's what we both wanted
I drank my last beer and smoked my last bowl Time to leave these thoughts behind Time to match my dead body with my dead soul Backstabbers and phonies Find someone else to betray My last day is finally upon me Why did you lie and say it was okay Now your lies are wasted Pullin the trigger and taking my last breath
"I'm sorry it had to end this way My only choice was to go away Don't stand above me crying I'm happy now and I'm above you flying I send my love below to cure your pain And knowing you have what I never gained And that is having the strength to pull through And I say thank you for that They say the good die young I was never good here So now that I died young Maybe I can be labeled as good"
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