Thank you all for your kind opinions.
I'm really thrilled at how many creative people we have here, it's so amazing. When you put your mind and heart into writing, the end result can only be wonderful. I love when I come here after a rather crappy day, and be able to read all of your creations. Keep up the good work friends
Well, this one was written for the person I love right now, so it may seem a bit too "pink", hehe. Hope you like it though
Heart-Attack as days go byMy heart beats fast.. now.. here.. today..
Since ever, I'd say, since our love has grown
Because yes, these strong knots are our own, magically sown
Throughout all this time, until today, month of may..
Throughout all this time, until today, month of may
Like an angel, there you lay, fallen from the bluish sky
You have caught my eye, haven't you? Oh my..
Making me wonder.. are you, are you the way?
Making me wonder.. are you, are you the way?
I'm sure of it, please stay, don't cross the line
I feel fine, no hurries, as long as your heart's mine
To take.. to love.. to hold dear, and forever recall the day
To take.. to love.. to hold dear, and forever recall the day
I'll lead you, some way, under the big trees, remember?
Sweet surrender.. to the pink blossoms falling, so tender..
What a sight to behold, I hope the sky's not gray..
What a sight to behold, I hope the sky's not gray
By then, I hope a sunlight ray comes down on us
Unlike Icarus, burnt his wings whilst dreaming, near the sun's radius
We won't be such martyrs, for this is no lost cause, so pray..
We won't be such martyrs, for this is no lost cause, so pray..
For a change, that we may stay, together, forever
And ever, a stupid dream, does it seem? I hope not, it wouldn't be better
Than to stay with you, tight and close, not away..
Than to stay with you, tight and close, not away
Hide and seek, I don't want to play, rather be holding you
This love is true, believe me, you just have to see how much it grew..
My heart beats fast.. now.. here.. today..