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Post by Nessie on May 31, 2005 17:07:30 GMT -5
Hey, I like that poem Nessie. Very cool  I've been in writers block again  Thank you very much, Soul! I'm sure you're creativity will return real soon!  |
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Post by TheAnomicSoul on May 31, 2005 18:06:23 GMT -5
^You're right Like right after I posted that I wrote this... The Undying SicknessThere was once A smile upon her face But now nothing seems to satisfy Her & her un-dying craving None of the riches in the world Can put that forgotten smile on her face Is she doomed to sorrow until her death Is there a cure for this pain she feels Or is this a test for my own actions Why does she feel all this pain And nothing seems to heal her wounds There was a time when I heard her beautiful laugh I seen the sparkle in her eyes But now she is silenced And her eyes are filled with tears There is no remedy To cure this agony of which she deals with Am I the oblivious nuisance Am I the reason for her sickness Cause there is nothing in this world That can bring that lost smile back home I ask that you not take her smile away from me But there is nothing I can say To make that sparkle find it's eye And her blood runs dry Her once beautiful face so frail The skin cold as ice Her humanity is disentigrating by the second There is no more life Hollow and dead she has become Was there something I missed A sign I didn't see? All I have now is un-answered questions |
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Post by britany on May 31, 2005 19:20:58 GMT -5
awwww that was really good soul i loved it, you write really good keep it up please  |
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Post by SparrowsSoliloquy on May 31, 2005 19:41:58 GMT -5
Very good Kevin.. I liked yours too Agnes.. its good to have some sensuality on here.. I love sensual poetry like that.. wonderful job!
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Post by Nessie on Jun 1, 2005 15:02:21 GMT -5
Wow Soul, I really loved your poem, I especially love the end/the last 2 paragraphs, it's really very well done!
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Post by SparrowsSoliloquy on Jun 2, 2005 15:47:00 GMT -5
Nessie!
Im so sorry it took me so long to reply to your private message.. I just now figured out how to access them! Im such a moron!
You write very beautiful poetry and I love reading it. You are very talented! You inspire me to write more too.. ! Im glad I got the chance to come across you on here.. and I wrote you a pm back:) sorry it took me so long. Much love to ya! Pm me anytime! Love- Jenn
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Post by moneyisevil on Jun 2, 2005 19:43:06 GMT -5
The monkeys climbed down from there tree
And what they would find would set them free
A big yellow banana is what they found
And now the monkeys make all kinda of sounds
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Post by Nessie on Jun 2, 2005 21:55:35 GMT -5
You write very beautiful poetry and I love reading it. You are very talented! You inspire me to write more too.. ! Im glad I got the chance to come across you on here.. Wow Jennifer, thank you so much. I feel honored if I really inspired you to write more...you really should! And I'm also glad that I came across you and everybody else here on the board. It's so great to talk to every one of you! |
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Post by Halo on Jun 2, 2005 22:03:54 GMT -5
The monkeys climbed down from there tree And what they would find would set them free A big yellow banana is what they found And now the monkeys make all kinda of sounds *wipes a tear from my eye* That was so inspiring money. And I'm also glad that I came across you and everybody else here on the board. It's so great to talk to every one of you! I'm so glad you all came here. I've never encountered another board like this, ever. We have such amazing people here. Kind, compassionate and fun. No bickering, no fights, no disrespect, no petty shit. How this happened, I have no idea. But I count myself very lucky to have you all as members here. It is great to talk to all of you! |
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Post by moneyisevil on Jun 2, 2005 22:31:46 GMT -5
big UPS to this place...hahaha...this place is awsome
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Post by Halo on Jun 2, 2005 22:39:02 GMT -5
big UPS to this place...hahaha...this place is awsome The people here are awesome. |
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Post by britany on Jun 2, 2005 22:43:16 GMT -5
things have been lost, to fast i've gone down the road,then i feel that it's raining in my head
what about tomorrow? what will happen when every thing is done with and i have no time to wait for the days that are
close to me. will all the memories be forgot from this day, i live in the past from now and i can hardly see what's
in front of me, i'll trip after the whole light is gone and be blind. we have to try to put it back together and
have are old feeling. i'm looking up and seeing you climbing to be back, your trying to take me
to be with you, i'm just trying to find my lost time. why does this happen to all of us, we loose all the time
and can't find our way back to what we loved. the light is breaking and now i can't see anything, i try so hard but i
loose what i collect. Things are changing all the time, and i must go on and forget, someone make this feeling go away.
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Post by Halo on Jun 2, 2005 22:52:52 GMT -5
Hey Brit! Good to see you writing again.
Sounds like you're going through a rough spot. Hope things are better soon. Keep putting your feelings out here and that may help.
*hugs*
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Post by britany on Jun 2, 2005 22:58:23 GMT -5
thank you alot halo, i love this bord it's a good way to get some feelings out....
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Post by Halo on Jun 2, 2005 23:13:35 GMT -5
You just get any feelings out that you need to dear. And you know we are all here for you too!
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