Post by Nyarlathotep on Jun 19, 2006 10:13:55 GMT -5
From the lack of responses to my previous poem, I can only guess that if you guys can't say something positive, you won't say anything at all. I appreciate the feedback.
Here's another crappy poem for your viewing pleasure. Maybe this is more to your liking:
Goth Girl 6-17-2006
Nail polish in every shade of red Plus silver and purple Perfectly placed bottles on the shelf Shunned by her peers The freak, the weird one Sits at her desk writing poetry Despair and suicide, unrequited love Occasional ode to mermaids and fairies Black eyeliner smudged from salty tears Addicted to clove cigarettes Little velvet dress hugging ashen breasts Trembling at the sight of a dagger Held ominously between them Lighting a candle and "dragon's blood" incense Her darkly painted lips curve upward Not this time, she thinks
The freak, the weird one Sits at her desk writing poetry Despair and suicide, unrequited love Occasional ode to mermaids and fairies Black eyeliner smudged from salty tears Addicted to clove cigarettes
Good poem. I especially liked this part.
I haven't posted any of my lyrics etc for ages so unlucky for you I feel like posted some...heh heh.
WHEN YOU'VE WON
A wall has built up around My selflessness I’m hanging on for you to tell me “I’m happy with this.” I feel better in My own artistic skin But I’m wallowing next to Your indescivness
When you think you’ve won You haven’t Not even if they care.
A tired break has melted through My shatterd heart I’m wandering deep in my own mind And I keep finding the start. All this pain I’m Kidding myself with I wish I could control but I’m Stuck in this black hole
You don’t please easy You don’t even talk Unless you want to. I admire that in you I admire that I admire you But you have to Let me in.
Last Edit: Jul 13, 2006 9:20:59 GMT -5 by ravenous
And I'm praying for rain I'm praying for tidal waves I wanna see the ground give way I wanna watch it all go down.....