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Post by Halo on Jun 10, 2005 23:49:40 GMT -5
^Those are very cool lyrics. Great job ;D Thanks. Your poem about your inner turmoil and your past is really sad. Both you and Halo are brave to talk about it. If you ever need to share your feelings about it, I'll listen. *big hug to the both of you!* Thanks ravenous. Good to see you participating in this thread. I really enjoyed "Shove". I hope to read more of your writing. Kevin: "Penicilate" was wonderful. I believe one day, you're words are going to reach many people and inspire them. |
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Post by Halo on Jun 10, 2005 23:50:38 GMT -5
Wow H. That's really weird. Yea, I thought so to when I read "six" in your poem. Not a good thing to have in common though.  |
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Post by TheAnomicSoul on Jun 11, 2005 0:47:05 GMT -5
No it isn't a good thing. I'm sorry you had to go through that too cause you are such a good person. And thanks for that comment. It meant alot to me  |
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Post by Halo on Jun 11, 2005 0:55:13 GMT -5
No it isn't a good thing. I'm sorry you had to go through that too cause you are such a good person. And thanks for that comment. It meant alot to me I'm sorry you had to experience it too Kevin. It's something I wouldn't wish on my worst enemy. I meant it about your writing. And I've seen you're writing "grow" since you've been here. I'm honored that you post your poems here and thank you for sharing with us. |
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Post by TheAnomicSoul on Jun 11, 2005 1:03:04 GMT -5
Thank you again H. I like sharing my writing with you people here. And I will keep posting them |
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Post by erishkigal on Jun 11, 2005 23:51:12 GMT -5
I wrote a poem but took it away
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Post by Halo on Jun 13, 2005 0:11:09 GMT -5
I wrote a poem but took it away Why would you do that? |
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Post by erishkigal on Jun 13, 2005 3:35:19 GMT -5
heh, because I posted it without reading the last page or two and it was,,,
quite rude and vulgar and I didnt want to ruin the ocean of sensitivity that was going on when my poem was pretty negative.
I might post it later.
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Post by TheAnomicSoul on Jun 13, 2005 3:56:07 GMT -5
Post it now!!! Don't worry about the "ocean of sensitivity". It has to be broken at sometime. I wanna read your peice of writing |
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Post by erishkigal on Jun 13, 2005 4:18:08 GMT -5
hahaha,
this makes me laugh now,,,man I was pissed off when I wrote this.
its called fuck off cunt
Stop crying you little faggot
No I do not want a blow job bitch
Cut yourself deeper next time
You think you know everything about me
I can not wait to leave you
Same sea of faces
Same sky blanketed with clouds
These clouds comfort you in your perfect little heaven
Grow up and realize
You’re not fucking special
We’re all the same
Label all you want
Judge me all you want
You’re just going to fucking die
Eventually after your pathetic meaningless life
You’re not fucking special
No I do not want a blow job bitch
FUCKING LOUD GRINDING SOUNDS OF CHAOS
A bleak dawn surrounds arcadia even
The shepards slaughtered and raped.
You think you’re so fucking special
Why cant you just leave me the fuck alone?!?!
Fucking cunt
NO I DONT WANT TO HEAR ABOUT YOUR HANGOVER
fucking silly bitch
give yourself away
give yourself away
give yourself away
six six six on your head
go to bed earlier next time
FVKK
you think you're so fucking cool.
kvlt grim tr00 bullshit
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Post by ravenous on Jun 13, 2005 6:13:32 GMT -5
^I liked it. Its honest feelings and you can tell.
Speaking of which....Some new lyrics I wrote.
PUSHED AWAY.
I'm backing out of this new me.
I'm backing out of the way I used to be.
I can't find a middle ground
Of acceptance for myself.
Everything I do, I pull down.
I'm twisting myself around
my own denials.
(c)I'll reap my own seeds
I'll pull my own weeds
I'll suffer for my own sins
I won't let you die for me.
I always lock my own cage
I throw the keys far from my reach
I won't accept the idea that
I'm happier on my own.
The challenge has dissapeard.
Finding someone to share this cage
beats me further down.
(c)I'll reap my own seeds....
I'll never let you out of my thoughts
you make me want to be better than you.
Its stops the pushing of myself
Get further away.
Its better with the music. I don't think I'm overly keen on this one. Any q's about it don't hesatate.
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Post by TheAnomicSoul on Jun 13, 2005 12:13:15 GMT -5
Hey erishkigal I really liked that right there. Kinda reminds me of something Korn would write. So I love it ;D Ravenous, That was also really good. You are a very talented writer. "The challenge has dissapeard. Finding someone to share this cage beats me further down." I really loved that part of it |
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Post by britany on Jun 13, 2005 14:39:11 GMT -5
You know writers block sucks and i have been in it for awhile and this is some stuff i put together hopefully i will get out of writers block soon..but this is just a little something i wrote for the time being.
So far way from here i am, being alone and not knowing what this day will hold.I pass out to the night and sleep into the morning, When i awake i wait till the day gives me what it's holding. This pain that i was given is here today for me, it turns to ash's, because i tried, but soon it will be coming to me again. I still am here in this hollow soul, looking for reason, looking for you. Each day i move some where else to look, finding nothing i fall to these people.With There are red skies above me and stone walls surrounding me, i am trapped with no way out but one. why has this closed on me, i have been out till now, this has hit me and put me down in the worse time i have been.
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Post by TheAnomicSoul on Jun 13, 2005 18:50:40 GMT -5
Cool poem Britany
Tear Me Away
It was all yours
To nurture and care for
But now, It is gone
Why is all these feelings wasted
Why am I tryin to make it right
I know how you deeply feel
I can see who you really are
Now this emotion has left me
Now this pain is breaking me
Now I see the truth
The truth I see before me is tearing me apart
I'm getting sicker by the day
I'm dying by the day
This pain I have inside
Is killing me
And I can't see
What I once had
Now all this shit
Has taken over me
Now this pain is showing
These tears are now flowing
This love i once held tight
Has slipped away
Why do things always end up like this
Why cant we feel the same
And everything I loved
Is raped away from me
There is nothing I can say
Not a thing I can do
To make things write again
I slipped to far
Every single sign of affection
All the love I had
Was beaten ripped away
And now i'm left alone
Everything is gone
I dont know if i can get it back
I want it back
I need it back
I need her back
Crying alone
Tears below my feet
Screams in my head
Wishing the dead
Hate builds up inside
Anger for nothing
But saddness for it all
Screaming and crying from deep inside
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Post by Halo on Jun 13, 2005 18:56:56 GMT -5
Good way to release the anger, Erish! Don't ever hesitate to post something here. It's your feelings and you are expressing them. Some feelings aren't too nice. But they need to be expressed too. Ravenous: I liked that but it's left me rather confused. I can't decide if the person is angry with themselves or someone else. Or it could be both I suppose. The one line says: "I can't find a middle ground of acceptance for myself", which seems the person is unhappy with they way they are. And then this line, "I'll never let you out of my thoughts you make me want to be better than you.", seems like the anger is now directed at someone else. Or...is it is a battle within the same person of not being able to be the person they want to be? |
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